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you know I'll always clock in for evil bisexuals, I can't wait for the full release 

my dad genuinely makes a little more sense to me now. thanks

I know a Georgia, someone who's very important to me. She wants so desperately to be someone for the world, to change something, to help somehow. She's so worried about the world as it is, as people hate people like her-- like us. Seeing all of Georgia's accolades, all that she worked for and abandoned so much for, reduced to a footnote was gutting. I don't think my Georgia will let her people go so easily, at least. This was gutting, thank you so much for creating this. 

this was super cute, zahra is so cute!!! I really love how you wiggled around the camera in this!! 

Really really gorgeous prose and whip-sharp formatting!!! I feel silly for not reading this sooner. Beyond the anger, the palpable frustration of rumination like chewing tree sap felt so relatable to me. Giving yourself a chance to do something a little better, to be better, to re-examine it all is something I do with my art very often. Phenomenal read!!!

PS: I peeked in the code at the last bit and I feel the same about artists I admire every single day, it really feels like this eternal struggle but I adore the chase. I feel it!! That feeling you feel, I feel it!!!!

PPS: Is it PPS or PSS? I hadn't heard that We Are Scientists song for over a decade, hearing that song after so so long in a game like this made for an incredible 3 minutes and 12 seconds. Thank you again. 

thanks for readingggg!!!

thanks for reading!!

thanks for reading and such a thoughtful comment!! I definitely agree with you on there being room to push it further!! I think I tend to get floaty and poetic before saying things point blank, but I think that only tends to be as effective as it can be when I have a lot more room to breathe. I just wanted to make something super short so it is what it is on this one. 

I did show the early stages of this to someone and they immediately said "have you played the beginner's guide" hahaha

thanks for constructive criticism, I really really loved the devil's tongue!!!

thank you so much for pointing out the quick menu thing and for reading this idea guy shower monologue! 

HEHE THANK YOUUUUU THANKS FOR READINGGGGG 

actually! the resets are kind of a simple animation if you can even call it that! the pov character voice is actually through "show text" rather than an actual character so it doesn't even get put into the history. (I used show text because I was thinking of like, an absolute newbie to renpy/coding doing all this but sort of thought the reload portions could have enough kayfabe to them  

it all looks like this: 

thank youuuu I had my eyes opened by KASCHEI for sure!! 

IT'S PEAK IT'S PEAK IT'S PEAK IT'S PEAK 

I really liked the changes to the border and the adventurer and the note it left off on and the adventurer and the general character design and the adventurer and the really strong character voices and the adventurer and the adventurer!!!!!I loved this I loved this 

This is so impressive!! I think I exhausted all my different options, but I'm stuck getting the ending with Tomomi at the school no matter what. Am I missing something?

EDIT: Nvm got another ending! I love you Kanna 

This concept was so fun, it definitely had me clicking away to find out what happened next!

It's really wild to me that the name came so late in the VN with how much it seemed to haunt the narrative! My friend and I were raving about how good it was and how you could take it three different ways after we read it!!!

Great first game!! I really loved the sprite reveals and the EMDR segment surprised me, it was really novel! 

THIS WAS SO FUNNNN it's so rare for a VN to get big belly laughs out of me and the first half really did that. Absolutely iconic. I really loved how true to the characterization you stay? Sarah simply doesn't want to step forward so she just never does. Really great work I loved it!!!

And thank you so much for reading and such insightful thoughts on it!!! It's a real joy to see so many people engaging so whole-heartedly with this.
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I'm really really happy that you gave so much thought to Hellen's actions, because as much as I loath her, she was a kid like you said. She absolutely had the capability to learn and change. I think she could've been friends with Chrys again. I think about Chrys a lot and I'm glad you felt strongly about her! 

Thanks so much for such a thoughtful comment, I definitely almost did as well and I'm quite glad I didn't. 

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To me, the really horrific part of Steph and Chrys's "relationship" (if you believe her) is how nice it was so I'm glad that resonated!! Thanks so much for reading! Trans women really are the women of women!!!

Thanks so much for reading!!! I think about all of them a lot and sometimes I wonder myself how much of Steph we saw. 

Stephanie: Aw geez, I'm sorry about all this, Hellen. I'll get out of your hair now. 

Just one more thing...

Aaaa I love when something I write can affect someone and make them squirm, yay!!! Also yeah I do think it's funny that I did a Ride Home again, thanks for reading!!! 

Thank you bestie I love women 

I do love how Steph speaks a lot in that scene and I'm glad it came across how I wanted it to!!! Thanks for reading!!!!

Hehehe I'm glad you felt that way, thank you for reading!!!!

This was fun!! I really enjoyed the way that Maria thought almost exclusively in metaphor once she was alone, but when someone else was around was almost forced to confront reality. I've definitely mused while appreciating the night air on a walk so I felt that a lot! Great first showing, I wanna see more!!!

The stage direction was so interesting and novel and I really adored the magic system. I loved the prose so much!! I could easily read much more of this!! Excellent work!!!!

Gorgeous art and gorgeous princess!!! The script was written very well and this is such a fine showing in general!  I can't wait for the full release! 

Insane team, insane premise, insane execution! I cannot believe renpy can do this. I was having a great time and then I was reminded of who wrote this visual novel and spent the last segment in deep emotional pain. Excellent work!!

Everyone must have put so much effort into this, good job! 

I really love how much is said with so precious little. The way that they're so close with such a dense nothing separating them is really gripping, I loved this!

CONGRATS ON YOUR FIRST GAME WOOOOOO the CGs were really nice!!! The sprites were really expressive and sold the script, nice work!!!

Hehe thank youuuuu this really does feel crazy cohesive because of porks' efforts!! Thanks for reading as always!!!!

Yes, she certainly was. Thanks so much for the kinds words!!

Twirling my hair around my finger I like them both a lot. Thank you for reading!!!!

Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad it was gripping!! I haven't really been able to let any of these women go myself!

Yaaaay thank you for reading I'll be rotating Stephanie in my mind forever 

Porks did such an amazing job with the visuals! I only make nice yuri 

I love making wholesome yuri