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this reminds me of breath of the wild or the hunter call of the wild ost, pretty cool but it lacks some sort of rythym part, i get it is ambient music but if it does not have that it just sound a little too redundant, and real recorded instruments would have been a really good addition.

overall really good and i really liked that you recorded the ambient sounds of the park

really good coherence between the tracks, it follows a story, but i would like to hear it all in one track, the only bad thing is that its so coherence beacuse all the tracks are really similar, i mean you can note the differences between each one but they are kinda redundant, you could have shorten it by a third and make it all one track and it would feel the same or better

its one of the best that i heard in this jam but i have to be constructive with my comment

dude wtf why you show all that equipment, anyway, pretty experimental and cool, it could have use some more instruments to represent a melody and some rhythm but its good this way tho

its well rounded, overall good coherence but some things like the bad tempo on some of the notes in the piano that you could have use the humanization feature in reaper to make them more subtle, or the bad mixing in drowning or the fact that you could have just put all the tracks together in one song and it would sound much better and listenable...

you have a lot to work on but you are in the right way, keep on it!

its simple but good, the quality of the plugins are kinda bad but it gives it a retro vibe, cool

you should have added some more instruments to that

thanks!

i dont see why it doesnt apply for the theme, its just metal and i think is cool to add diversity to the genres of the jam (even tho this is not entirenly ambient music) and how you can see the theme in a track

the  rough mixing is kinda part of the genre but im always trying to improve so thanks

i have another track that i made for that jam i just copypaste that by accident sry, thanks

sure, just credits and let me know about your gam

ok buddy, also your game looks so awesome and funny i would really like to make more songs for it! but its ok if you only need this one

thanks, i appreciate that you notice that ryhthm switch and i agree on you that videogames need more death metal, they had to compare me with doom because there is no other big game with a death metal ost xd

thanks

this is the most experimental ost i seen in this jam, its good in that aspect but in the others it lacks a lot.

. it needs in most of the recording some sort of rhythm instrument, you could have make it with another guitar taping or doing smt to keep the songs firm

. learn about double tracking, it gives your recorded instruments a lot more depth

. learn reaper, just that

. better song structures could help

there are some other things like fade in/out to end, begin and make songs loopable, better mixing, etc

i hope this helps.

overall really good quality of plugins and composition but i wanna be constructive with this so i have to be honest, i didnt like the feeling this ost gave me, it is so good produced that it lacks a little bit of personality, it just feels like a mass production but dont get me wrong i really liked it and i gave it a really good rating, its just that it personally gave me that feeling.

i hope this helps you to grow up as a composer.

pd: sry if my coment feels agressive im not an english speaker

thanks, maybe the lack of an orchestra affected on that medieval feeling not shining but i just didnt want to put it, maybe i should have done it

thanks!

you have potential

love the inspiration on sextape

Frutiger aero ahh song, good.

good, beautiful leit motiv

yeah sure just put me in the credits xd sry for not replying earlier i didnt open the itch page in a lot of time, also if you want me to remake it a little better just dm not gonna charge u xd

This is going to be an intro for a whole sludge metal song, i wanted to upload the whole song for the jam but it was impossible xd.